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  1. Posted: July 31, 2015In: Public

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 4, 2015 at 7:30 pm

    Still not making sense. Who is the main character? What is he trying to do? Who or what stands in his way?

    Still not making sense. Who is the main character? What is he trying to do? Who or what stands in his way?

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  2. Posted: July 31, 2015In: Public

    in the near future a Government sponsored torturer is using his position to steal information and money from death row inmates. He is unaware that his next prisoner is an undercover agent sent to trap him.

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 4, 2015 at 3:32 pm

    The more you try to explain the story and the characters' motivations the less I understand any of it...

    The more you try to explain the story and the characters’ motivations the less I understand any of it…

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  3. Posted: August 4, 2015In: Public

    A retired golf enthusiast is scammed out of his life savings and a country club membership, but when he sees an old man die and moves up to number five on the waiting list, he devises a killer plan to jump to #1

    mrliteral Samurai
    Added an answer on August 4, 2015 at 8:54 am

    He lost all his money but only cares about getting back into the country club? How was he scammed, and why? Why him? People like an underdog but not someone suffering from their own stupidity, and being scammed makes it sound like his own damn fault. Show us how he's more sympathetic so we can be onRead more

    He lost all his money but only cares about getting back into the country club? How was he scammed, and why? Why him? People like an underdog but not someone suffering from their own stupidity, and being scammed makes it sound like his own damn fault. Show us how he’s more sympathetic so we can be on his side. Maybe say he was cheated, or it was stolen.

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