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?Hands of Stone? Boxer turned attorney, Maxx Cohen, takes off the gloves fighting an uphill battle with ruthless federal prosecutors while bobbing and weaving his way through representing the New York Mafia.
Hold off on the cutesy boxing lingo in a logline; just make it clear what the story's about.
Hold off on the cutesy boxing lingo in a logline; just make it clear what the story’s about.
See lessWhen a former priest on death row breaks out of prison, all he wants is a fresh start, but his serial-killer split personality only makes it harder for him to evade the FBI? and the lethal injection.
How does a person fall in love with a house? How is this related to his being on death row? Which of them are we even talking about? And again: why wouldn't the priest turn himself in?
How does a person fall in love with a house? How is this related to his being on death row? Which of them are we even talking about? And again: why wouldn’t the priest turn himself in?
See less"As a wealthy upper-class young man enters adulthood during the second US civil war, he is suddenly disowned and ousted from his family estate, causing him to experience the life of the impoverished in a military-industrial society, eventually joining the ranks on the front line to prove to his father he deserves his inheritance."
Definitely way too long, with too much description not adding up to anything. Wealthy and upper class mean the same thing; no need for both. Same deal with disowned and ousted from family: exact same meaning. Why was he disowned, anyway? Just because? You have to provide more detail than this. We haRead more
Definitely way too long, with too much description not adding up to anything. Wealthy and upper class mean the same thing; no need for both. Same deal with disowned and ousted from family: exact same meaning. Why was he disowned, anyway? Just because? You have to provide more detail than this. We have to know who’s doing what and why. And how does joining the ranks prove something to his father? What does he even need to prove? We need the biggest plot points, the main protagonist and antagonist, the major motivations. And that’s about it.
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