1. Posted: June 15, 2016In:

    When his nuclear experiment erupts and infects a city?s atmosphere, a novice scientist covers up the accident and must concoct a cure before an aspiring journalist uncovers the truth.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    I could be wrong, but I think it would be extremely hard to keep a nuclear accident secret. Like dpg?said there would be radioactivity, which causes disease, without being a disease itself. Radiation tends to be detected, most likely by government authorities which would investigate. If the experimeRead more

    I could be wrong, but I think it would be extremely hard to keep a nuclear accident secret. Like dpg?said there would be radioactivity, which causes disease, without being a disease itself.

    Radiation tends to be detected, most likely by government authorities which would investigate.
    If the experiment takes place at a research facility, or at a nuclear power plant, I’m pretty sure the radiation would be detected there first and, the whole thing would have to be investigated.
    If the protagonist is someone who is doing nuclear experiments on his own in his mom’s basement, I’m pretty sure the Department of Homeland Security very likely would be among those called in to investigate. If radioactivity?comes from a place where it’s not supposed to, in a densely populated area, I suspect a lot of people are going to leap to the conclusion that it’s terrorism.
    But then again, I could be completely wrong.
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  2. Posted: March 10, 2016In:

    After leaving prison, two aging con men go straight by opening a coffee shop but get pulled into mob-like turf war with the other caf?s in a small seaside town.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    What is their goal? Who's trying to stop them and what happens if they fail? Could it be that they want to spend the rest of their lives in freedom? Maybe there's an overzealous parole officer keen on putting them back behind bars for the slightest infraction of the law, possibly even trying to findRead more

    What is their goal? Who’s trying to stop them and what happens if they fail?

    Could it be that they want to spend the rest of their lives in freedom?
    Maybe there’s an overzealous parole officer keen on putting them back behind bars for the slightest infraction of the law, possibly even trying to find a reason even if there isn’t any?

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  3. Posted: December 29, 2015In:

    ?When a teenager is accidentally transferred to a school for criminals, he will have to learn all the tricks of the trade and survive the competition in order to win the honor of being the city?s next don.?

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai

    Is it a "normal" school that teaches its students to be criminals, or is the teen sent to a juvie hall, or whatever the correct term is? Either version is interesting in its own way. If it's a "normal" school where all teachers, students, and parents are involved in organized crime and the authoritiRead more

    Is it a “normal” school that teaches its students to be criminals, or is the teen sent to a juvie hall, or whatever the correct term is? Either version is interesting in its own way.

    If it’s a “normal” school where all teachers, students, and parents are involved in organized crime and the authorities hasn’t caught on? Or the parents and teachers have the authorities in their pocket, as it were? This is where I could see it being a comedy.
    If it’s a detention center for juvenile delinquents, and he’s sent there because someone makes a clerical error, thinking it’s an ordinary boarding school? This one would be a bit more gritty, and realistic, with more of the typical prison movie tropes.
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