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After a ship is shot down on a remote desert planet, the surviving Marine’s only hope of survival, and getting off the planet, is in a nearby mining town which is being torn apart by two feuding gangs.
There's the worldbuilding thing like Dkpough1 said, and I intend to make use of some worldbuilding?real estate that I already have. Though the setting is an alien planet, it would still have to be shot somewhere on Earth, which could very well be in the Australian Outback, since it would be a desertRead more
There’s the worldbuilding thing like Dkpough1 said, and I intend to make use of some worldbuilding?real estate that I already have.
After a ship is shot down on a remote desert planet, the surviving Marine’s only hope of survival, and getting off the planet, is in a nearby mining town which is being torn apart by two feuding gangs.
Thank you both for your comments, and logline help. I think it was Nir Shelter who raised similar questions in the previous thread, as you do here dpg. Yes, I haven't worked out all the details myself, but at the moment it's one of the gangs that are responsible for shooting down the ship. They needRead more
Thank you both for your comments, and logline help.
I think it was Nir Shelter who raised similar questions in the previous thread, as you do here dpg.
Yes, I haven’t worked out all the details myself, but at the moment it’s one of the gangs that are responsible for shooting down the ship.
They need to have a reason for shooting the ship down, I know that much, I just haven’t managed to figure out exactly what that reason is, yet. The ship was bound for another planet in the system, so the Marine was never supposed to come to that place, but he’ll still have new, important, information to bring to his superiors when he leaves at the end. I’m still working on what exactly that information is.
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I agree with Moses99. I just want to add that Mad Battleships makes my mind's eye picture a fleet of Battleships run by AI, along the lines of HAL 9000.
I agree with Moses99.
I just want to add that Mad Battleships makes my mind’s eye picture a fleet of Battleships run by AI, along the lines of HAL 9000.
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