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  1. Posted: September 11, 2016In: SciFi

    After a ship is shot down on a remote desert planet, the surviving Marine’s only hope of survival, and getting off the planet, is in a nearby mining town which is being torn apart by two feuding gangs.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on September 13, 2016 at 7:02 am

    There's the worldbuilding thing like Dkpough1 said, and I intend to make use of some worldbuilding?real estate that I already have. Though the setting is an alien planet, it would still have to be shot somewhere on Earth, which could very well be in the Australian Outback, since it would be a desertRead more

    There’s the worldbuilding thing like Dkpough1 said, and I intend to make use of some worldbuilding?real estate that I already have.

    Though the setting is an alien planet, it would still have to be shot somewhere on Earth, which could very well be in the Australian Outback, since it would be a desert at least in the area of the crash and the town.
    And then, even movies that are set in specific places aren’t always shot in those places for various reasons. Raiders of the Lost Ark is set in Egypt but was shot in Tunisia, because at the time that was cheaper. The scenes in Peru at the beginning of the movie are Hawaii. Peter Jackson built Times Square, and a few other parts of NYC for King Kong on the backlot of Stonestreet Studios in Wellington, New Zeeland. That was cheaper than going to the US, getting permission, closing down Times Square for weeks (or however long it took to shoot those scenes,) and make them look like 1933 instead of 2005. And then they only built the?ground level of the buildings, everything from the first floor up is CGI.
    This story could be done economically, and still be SciFi. Only the shots of space ships moving would have to be CGI. The way I imagine it the story would start with the ship already on the ground, after the crash and the Marine walking away from it. The crash would occur in flashbacks, and through the flight recorder ? I had the notion today that this could be something everybody tries to get since it contains evidence the ship was shot down. ? The ship on the ground and the mining town would probably rather be matte paintings. Sets could be modular and easy to reconfigure, and re-used for other productions.
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  2. Posted: September 11, 2016In: SciFi

    After a ship is shot down on a remote desert planet, the surviving Marine’s only hope of survival, and getting off the planet, is in a nearby mining town which is being torn apart by two feuding gangs.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on September 12, 2016 at 6:29 am

    Thank you both for your comments, and logline help. I think it was Nir Shelter who raised similar questions in the previous thread, as you do here dpg. Yes, I haven't worked out all the details myself, but at the moment it's one of the gangs that are responsible for shooting down the ship. They needRead more

    Thank you both for your comments, and logline help.

    I think it was Nir Shelter who raised similar questions in the previous thread, as you do here dpg.

    Yes, I haven’t worked out all the details myself, but at the moment it’s one of the gangs that are responsible for shooting down the ship.

    They need to have a reason for shooting the ship down, I know that much, I just haven’t managed to figure out exactly what that reason is, yet. The ship was bound for another planet in the system, so the Marine was never supposed to come to that place, but he’ll still have new, important, information to bring to his superiors when he leaves at the end. I’m still working on what exactly that information is.

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  3. Posted: August 27, 2016In: SciFi

    Izzy Concannon: Rogue, outlaw, lost Terran, finds herself on a doomed vessel hunting the last of the mad battleships in deep space.

    Adam Bernstr?m Samurai
    Added an answer on August 28, 2016 at 6:27 am

    I agree with Moses99. I just want to add that Mad Battleships makes my mind's eye picture a fleet of Battleships run by AI, along the lines of HAL 9000.

    I agree with Moses99.

    I just want to add that Mad Battleships makes my mind’s eye picture a fleet of Battleships run by AI, along the lines of HAL 9000.

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