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  1. Posted: May 17, 2017In: Comedy

    When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.

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    Added an answer on May 18, 2017 at 5:42 pm

    It's safe to say that body switching souls has become a bit of a trope. It, therefore, doesn't really matter for this kind of film how they switch (lighting, magic potion or voodoo spell) what does is the ensuing complication.? This actually sounds interesting, while not original, it may have an audRead more

    It’s safe to say that body switching souls has become a bit of a trope. It, therefore, doesn’t really matter for this kind of film how they switch (lighting, magic potion or voodoo spell) what does is the ensuing complication.? This actually sounds interesting, while not original, it may have an audience.

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  2. Posted: May 3, 2017In: Horror

    When an alcoholic son discovers his father gets occasionally possessed by a harmful evil spirit, he must protect his family from danger that threatens them and then find a way to stop it for good.

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    Added an answer on May 3, 2017 at 11:29 am

    The order of the descriptions is wrong - he must stop it for good in order to protect his family... I suggest you describe the possession of the father as a definitive event instead of an arbitrary one. Here is my try: After a father becomes possessed, his alcoholic son recruits a priest to help stoRead more

    The order of the descriptions is wrong – he must stop it for good in order to protect his family…

    I suggest you describe the possession of the father as a definitive event instead of an arbitrary one.

    Here is my try:

    After a father becomes possessed, his alcoholic son recruits a priest to help stop the evil spirit for good in order to save his family.

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  3. Posted: April 29, 2017In: Drama

    Updated: When an Eskimo grandmother is abandoned by her migrating family during a famine, she struggles to survive through a bitter winter until?the ?spring ?thaw.

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    Added an answer on April 29, 2017 at 6:21 pm

    Good ending or not, the story should be compelling and unfortunately, this doesn't sound compelling. I think the problem lies in the fact that there is no out of the ordinary event that happens to motivate her to take action. Eskimos traditionally abandon their elderly on sheets of floating ice to dRead more

    Good ending or not, the story should be compelling and unfortunately, this doesn’t sound compelling. I think the problem lies in the fact that there is no out of the ordinary event that happens to motivate her to take action. Eskimos traditionally abandon their elderly on sheets of floating ice to die alone, so to some degree, she knew this day was going to come. Perhaps if she were to be separated from the family unexpectedly (freak storm or a?large break in the ice) she would rightly be motivated to try and get back to them in order to help them. Even then she would still need to be made out to be the matriarch the family relies on for leadership, otherwise, her own survival alone is not enough of a motivation.

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