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When an irresponsible party girl’s father is framed by the mob, leaving her with an estranged 11-year-old to raise, she must fool social services to keep the child and outwit the mob to get her father out of prison.
Agreed with the above. What is going to be the main action she pursues? Raise the child on her own? Or, trick social services? OR, outsmart the mafia? Either one will do, but as mentioned above, the genre will change according to the choice.
Agreed with the above.
What is going to be the main action she pursues? Raise the child on her own? Or, trick social services? OR, outsmart the mafia? Either one will do, but as mentioned above, the genre will change according to the choice.
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Good suggestions by DPG and Richiev.I'll add that this should be a drama instead of a thriller, as it really hinges on the human connection made between two strangers.Also, it could work well as a 5 min short but I couldn't see this as much longer than that.I agree with DPG about her needing to overRead more
Good suggestions by DPG and Richiev.
I’ll add that this should be a drama instead of a thriller, as it really hinges on the human connection made between two strangers.
Also, it could work well as a 5 min short but I couldn’t see this as much longer than that.
I agree with DPG about her needing to overcome something in the process, not sure being suicidal can work though – it’s good but in a short film limited to shots around either end of a phone conversation it may not work. What if her flaw was being an outright bitch, and I mean a really nasty piece of work. This could be established by her treatment of coworkers and clients on the phone – self-centered, impatient and simply unpleasant in every way. But when she realizes a man’s life is in her hands she learns a valuable life lesson. Just a thought.
See lessA soldier returns home with a Bronze Star, a Purple Heart, and a desire to become a professional high stakes poker player, believing it is a safer lifestyle. So she thought.
Was there a specific event that made him want to become a poker player? If so, that would make for the inciting incident and needs to be described, if not you need to come up with an event that would logically motivate him to want to play poker. Perhaps he needs a large amount of money for a good caRead more
Was there a specific event that made him want to become a poker player? If so, that would make for the inciting incident and needs to be described, if not you need to come up with an event that would logically motivate him to want to play poker. Perhaps he needs a large amount of money for a good cause and is also a good poker player, now he must become one for the cause, whatever it may be.
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