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A Estranged Father is kidnapped by his business partner in NYC, He must escape to reconcile with his kids or die regarding in a small old apartment.
I think this was a mistake and the word was supposed to be "....regretting..."Escaping a kidnapping is fine but not enough - it's too vague a description as an escape can mean any number of things. What will he do specifically? How will he achieve his goal of freedom?
I think this was a mistake and the word was supposed to be “….regretting…”
Escaping a kidnapping is fine but not enough – it’s too vague a description as an escape can mean any number of things. What will he do specifically? How will he achieve his goal of freedom?
See lessA selfish billionaire businessman went to NYC were he got kidnapped by his opponents, and left to die in a small old room.
Great comment by Richiev. Feel free to check out the 'Formula' tab up top for more information on how best to structure loglines.
Great comment by Richiev.
Feel free to check out the ‘Formula’ tab up top for more information on how best to structure loglines.
See lessA Ethical Hacker and his reconciled mother, attempt to muckraking the person behind hackings of his employer
The plot is too vague for this logline to work, here are? a few points that stood out:Not sure making the hacker ethical is necessary - all hackers are ethical in their own minds...Not sure also why the mother is necessary if it's his story.Lastly, I'm not sure what specifically is the hacker's goalRead more
The plot is too vague for this logline to work, here are? a few points that stood out:
Not sure making the hacker ethical is necessary – all hackers are ethical in their own minds…
Not sure also why the mother is necessary if it’s his story.
Lastly, I’m not sure what specifically is the hacker’s goal, as this last one is crucial I suggest making sure the goal is clear first before making any other changes.
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