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(REVISED) When a single-minded entrepreneur conducts an unauthorised trial of a ?telepathic phone? in a small town and accidentally transmits a virus that makes everyone lose self-control, she must find a cure with the help of the only uninfected person – a technophobic hippy.
Agreed with the above the logic flaw renders the logline confusing. What if you were to change it so that someone else triggers the viral spread and the only two left un effected are the MC and a different character to the hippy, one that brings a useful skill to the party and helps the MC save theRead more
Agreed with the above the logic flaw renders the logline confusing. What if you were to change it so that someone else triggers the viral spread and the only two left un effected are the MC and a different character to the hippy, one that brings a useful skill to the party and helps the MC save the town. What if it was the local geeky kid, the one that all the kids at school would make fun of and no one took seriously? Now it is up to him to save them all.
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The concept in this logline is confusing. Is it the change to her size that's her inciting incident? ?Is that what motivates her to take action and achieve something? If so what is it she needs to achieve as a result of the size change? If the goal is saving the scientist? Then the inciting incidentRead more
The concept in this logline is confusing.
Is it the change to her size that’s her inciting incident? ?Is that what motivates her to take action and achieve something?
If so what is it she needs to achieve as a result of the size change?
If the goal is saving the scientist? Then the inciting incident ?is the scientist getting kidnapped by the mob, and therefore that should be described in the beginning.
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This doesn't describe a plot, rather a situation.Here are some questions to help you draft it again, try and include the answers to them: What is her inciting incident? What motivates her to need to take action? What is her goal?
This doesn’t describe a plot, rather a situation.
Here are some questions to help you draft it again, try and include the answers to them:
See lessWhat is her inciting incident?
What motivates her to need to take action?
What is her goal?