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A Vegas waitress tripled in size falls for the scientist who accidentally enlarged her, sacrificing newfound showroom stardom to save him when he’s kidnapped by her abusive ex, a blackmailing mobster and a wealthy, widowed former showgirl.
Hi Vincent, I've read your logline several times but am still unable to understand it. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar.
Hi Vincent,
I’ve read your logline several times but am still unable to understand it. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar.
See lessA pacifistic NYPD cadet and a loner detective investigate the source of a new street drug, leading them to a notorious dealer; but they’re just a pawn, and someone much more powerful runs the operation.
You need to give the reader more details than are currently in the logline. What makes this duo's mission interesting? What is the major obstacle standing in their way? Right now this concept lacks unique elements needed to separate it from most police procedural fare on TV.
You need to give the reader more details than are currently in the logline. What makes this duo’s mission interesting? What is the major obstacle standing in their way? Right now this concept lacks unique elements needed to separate it from most police procedural fare on TV.
See lessWhen his own handgun is used to kill his partner, an unassuming detective defies the police department by refusing to carry a gun, even as he pursues the killer.
Agreed with DPG and Brennan. Why not make it so he carries the gun but can't use it - it never comes out of the holster. Like Brennan wrote, he would have to either investigate the murder on the sly or take a leave of absence, but my problem is that this well and truly falls into the cliche side ofRead more
Agreed with DPG and Brennan.
Why not make it so he carries the gun but can’t use it – it never comes out of the holster.
Like Brennan wrote, he would have to either investigate the murder on the sly or take a leave of absence, but my problem is that this well and truly falls into the cliche side of things.
See lessIs there an interesting twist you’re saving up your proverbial sleeve?