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When a man?s new world crashes down around him because his old world comes calling, he unleashes hell on everyone responsible ? starting at the bottom and working his way up.
So pretty much most action movies... I refer you to my comment about the importance of clarity and detail in loglines on your other post.
So pretty much most action movies…
I refer you to my comment about the importance of clarity and detail in loglines on your other post.
See lessWhen Jack?s AI camera accidentally snaps photos of a murder and kidnapping, he mounts a personal rescue mission when calling the cops proves to get a little complicated.
Too vague. Loglines need to describe, in definitive terms, what happens in a plot. Is the victim kidnapped or murdered? What does "...a personal rescue mission..." mean? Is he going to track down the murderers? Is he going to kill the murderers? Is he going to have them arrested? What does "...proveRead more
Too vague.
Loglines need to describe, in definitive terms, what happens in a plot.
Is the victim kidnapped or murdered?
What does “…a personal rescue mission…” mean? Is he going to track down the murderers? Is he going to kill the murderers? Is he going to have them arrested?
What does “…proves to get a little complicated…” mean in practical terms?
Don’t be afraid to give away too much in a logline – if the goal is compelling a producer will want to read the script, at the same time, if you have a twist in the story and it elevates the concept, a producer will also want to read the script. Your goal, as a writer, is to get read, therefore, the more your logline describes interesting stuff the better the chance of a script request.
Last note, there’s no need for names in a logline (unless it’s a historical, biopic or franchise – I wish people would read the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar before posting) and why Jack? How is this kidnap/murder personally connected to him?
See lessAfter allied bombing accidentally destroys her safehouse, a jew joins the dutch resistance, only to face a series of deception
The web needs to be described better. What is the specific nature of this web, what's her major problem and what specifically must she do? What's her goal?
The web needs to be described better. What is the specific nature of this web, what’s her major problem and what specifically must she do?
What’s her goal?
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