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  1. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Thriller

    E.T.A. is about a professional contract killer, who works as a flight attendant, enabling her to travel the world performing political assassinations.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2018 at 5:21 pm

    Agreed with Variable.Is this a TV series or film?I think this basic premise would make for a great TV series and you should seriously consider developing it for VOD streaming services.

    Agreed with Variable.

    Is this a TV series or film?

    I think this basic premise would make for a great TV series and you should seriously consider developing it for VOD streaming services.

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  2. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Drama

    After a lovesick flight attendant and the wife of a doppelganger of a famous actor becomes pregnant by him, he sets out to convince them to share a home with him.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2018 at 5:19 pm

    This logline is confusing - I'm not sure if the flight attendant and wife are the same character or two separate characters and it's unclear who the pronoun 'he' in the second clause is referring to. Other than the confusion over the wording in the logline, it's also unclear what the story will be -Read more

    This logline is confusing – I’m not sure if the flight attendant and wife are the same character or two separate characters and it’s unclear who the pronoun ‘he’ in the second clause is referring to.

    Other than the confusion over the wording in the logline, it’s also unclear what the story will be – is it about someone convincing a couple of women to live with him? This doesn’t sound like much of a story, if anything, the story would really start after they agree to live together and all the problems that come about as a result of the awkward triangle.

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  3. Posted: March 14, 2018In: Drama

    MARBLE HILL SKINNIES AND THE BLACKJACK KID: The story of 2 young men addict to drugs, sex and gambling. They decide the best treatment is to go to Vegas and over indulge the disease.

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    Added an answer on March 14, 2018 at 5:13 pm

    Kind of sounds like Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas - not sure you can top a cult classic.

    Kind of sounds like Fear and Loathing in Las Vegas – not sure you can top a cult classic.

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