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After several defeats, a determined young boxer prepares for a last chance to reignite his career while dealing with his unsupportive family and the hoodlums he grew up with.
I?m no expert on the matter but I will say that it's not the boxing ring rather what motivates the boxer to enter it that will sell the script. In other words, develop the story around the boxer character but don?t let the boxing alone be his goal.
I?m no expert on the matter but I will say that it’s not the boxing ring rather what motivates the boxer to enter it that will sell the script. In other words, develop the story around the boxer character but don?t let the boxing alone be his goal.
See lessAn out-for-himself and talented brain hacker, who sells off stolen ideas and concepts to large conglomerates, is hired to escort a scientist, who holds the key to clean energy in her head, to open source rebels so she can provide the idea free to all humanity.
Agreed with the others. This is also too wordy and complex to work well as a logline. One logic flaw is that he doesn't come across as necessarily a good option to escort anyone. He's a hacker and won't necessarily be able to stop bad guys closing in on her, if anything, he would be needed after sheRead more
Agreed with the others.
This is also too wordy and complex to work well as a logline.
One logic flaw is that he doesn’t come across as necessarily a good option to escort anyone. He’s a hacker and won’t necessarily be able to stop bad guys closing in on her, if anything, he would be needed after she is delivered.
It also seems like she has the greater stake and, in my mind, makes for a more interesting main character. What if she hires him to help her upload the technology to open source platforms but is caught by the big bad corporate and they both have to fight to get to safety with the rebels.
See lessAfter he suffers a head injury, a mentally unstable man starts remembering and perceiving reality differently and must piece together that is real and what’s fake to find and stop those affecting reality
Agreed with DPG. Best you specify the danger these bad guys are posing. Also, if you could connect the bad guys to the original head injury it would help. What if he was attacked by a team of specialists etc... now he must find and stop them but in order to do so, he has to decipher real from imaginRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Best you specify the danger these bad guys are posing. Also, if you could connect the bad guys to the original head injury it would help. What if he was attacked by a team of specialists etc… now he must find and stop them but in order to do so, he has to decipher real from imaginary.
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