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A couple take up rock climbing to work out their trust issues, but when they witness a murder half way up a 200 meter cliff, they become the killers next targets and must work together to get out alive.
Agreed with Wind. The premise has potential but it needs to be expanded if it's to work in a full-length film. I don't understand how taking up rock climbing will help their trust issues, why not just describe them as they are: After a couple with trust issues go on a rock climbing trip they witnessRead more
Agreed with Wind.
The premise has potential but it needs to be expanded if it’s to work in a full-length film.
I don’t understand how taking up rock climbing will help their trust issues, why not just describe them as they are:
After a couple with trust issues go on a rock climbing trip they witness a murder and must rely on each other to escape the killer with their lives intact.
Still very lean on story. Maybe it would be better to relocate the story to a mountaintop in the middle of the wilderness so as to put them days away from civilisation. Rock climbing implies that they are on a cliff and just need to get down to the bottom.
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Is the bulk of this story about him convincing the socialite or about him playing poker? Gambler movies have traditionally been about the life of the gambler outside of the game. In most good examples, you'll find that the writer used the problems in the gambler's life to enhance the stakes of the gRead more
Is the bulk of this story about him convincing the socialite or about him playing poker?
Gambler movies have traditionally been about the life of the gambler outside of the game. In most good examples, you’ll find that the writer used the problems in the gambler’s life to enhance the stakes of the game.? What problems or conflict does this gambler have in his life? How will you make him winning or losing a big deal?
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Agreed with Nicholas. There's much about this that doesn't seem to work in a cause and effect relationship. I'll add that it's a bit unclear how this premise allows for the genre, in other words, it doesn't sound funny. Where is the humour going to come from?
Agreed with Nicholas.
There’s much about this that doesn’t seem to work in a cause and effect relationship. I’ll add that it’s a bit unclear how this premise allows for the genre, in other words, it doesn’t sound funny.
Where is the humour going to come from?
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