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Desperate to repair and reunite his dysfunctional family, an idealistic young man brings them to an abandoned island mansion in an attempt to relive his nostalgic childhood vacations, only to discover it overrun by giant carnivorous slugs. (HORROR-COMEDY)
I have to admit, I love the "...carnivorous slugs..." - it's weird and original. Find a better description for the MC "...idealistic young man..." means very little in a logline. Give him a genuine flaw and preferably relevant profession such as; arrogant family psychologist. If his goal is to reuniRead more
I have to admit, I love the “…carnivorous slugs…” – it’s weird and original. Find a better description for the MC “…idealistic young man…” means very little in a logline. Give him a genuine flaw and preferably relevant profession such as; arrogant family psychologist.
If his goal is to reunite the family, make the inciting incident something that relates directly to that. How about; after his parents divorce or after his estranged father returns home.
I think this has potential, and with a few changes, the logline could read very well.
See lessA young warrior wonders the wastelands of earth, seeking knowledge and strength to defend herself and others. Can she protect and help those who become her companions from, bandits, emperors and legendary warriors?
First question that comes to mind is; Well, can she? You need to tell us not let us guess. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar to learn more about loglines. What is her flaw? What event motivates her to take action? And, most importantly, what is her goal?
First question that comes to mind is; Well, can she?
You need to tell us not let us guess. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar to learn more about loglines.
What is her flaw? What event motivates her to take action? And, most importantly, what is her goal?
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Agreed with the others. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information about loglines. Also, feel free to study other posts on this site, there are many examples of different kinds of loglines you can learn from.
Agreed with the others.
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information about loglines. Also, feel free to study other posts on this site, there are many examples of different kinds of loglines you can learn from.
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