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On an isolated, faraway island, a blind young man lives in between a peaceful religious native community. But when an ambiguous and seditious village member instills in the boy some doubts concerning their religion, harmony is broken and so it begins a spiral of violence that will bring the community to its destruction.
Agreed with Richieve and DPG. Loglines are tools used to describe a plot and have been used by the industry for many years, as such there are a few guidelines you can follow when writing one. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar to learn more about logline conventions.
Agreed with Richieve and DPG.
Loglines are tools used to describe a plot and have been used by the industry for many years, as such there are a few guidelines you can follow when writing one. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar to learn more about logline conventions.
See lessAn ex-smuggler seeks a quiet life, until past criminal associates find him and terrorize his new family, demanding a bigger cut from their last job.
Agreed with DPG and Knightrider. If he loves his family he should just hand over the money - problem solved. They should demand he does one last job, a bit cliche but the premise works better this way.
Agreed with DPG and Knightrider.
If he loves his family he should just hand over the money – problem solved.
They should demand he does one last job, a bit cliche but the premise works better this way.
See lessWhen an arcane creature disembowels several Asian women in 1900s San Francisco, a war-weary army officer teams with a disparate group of social outcasts to hunt it down? Only to discover the city council is the real force behind the monster?s bloodbath.
The one thing that came to mind at the end of reading the logline is 'why?' Why MUST this guy team up with these people and why MUST he hunt the monster? You have a main character, a course of action, and a goal, but the connective sinew that is motivation is lacking - the events lack a cause and efRead more
The one thing that came to mind at the end of reading the logline is ‘why?’
Why MUST this guy team up with these people and why MUST he hunt the monster?
You have a main character, a course of action, and a goal, but the connective sinew that is motivation is lacking – the events lack a cause and effect relationship.
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