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A greedy bounty hunter falsely accused of regicide must race against outlaws to earn a wish and clear his name.
The various pieces of this puzzle don't fit together very well...Why MUST he race against outlaws? I don't understand the connection between his false accusation and the consequence, it makes more sense that he (now an outlaw himself) would run away from the authorities.Secondly, I don't understandRead more
The various pieces of this puzzle don’t fit together very well…
Why MUST he race against outlaws? I don’t understand the connection between his false accusation and the consequence, it makes more sense that he (now an outlaw himself) would run away from the authorities.
Secondly, I don’t understand what a “…wish granting land…” is or what it looks like, is there a better objective to give him? Seeing as his goal is to clear his name, wouldn’t he need to find the person who really killed the king?
See lessA phone operator at a suicide prevention hotline becomes overwhelmed when three desperate people all call at the same time. *SHORT*
Silly of me, I knew it won so not sure why I only wrote it was nominated. Point is, this is definitely fertile dramatic grounds for a moving story but it will need something to help it stand out. Short films are extremely hard to produce well (I should know as I'm about to finish one myself) and warRead more
Silly of me, I knew it won so not sure why I only wrote it was nominated.
Point is, this is definitely fertile dramatic grounds for a moving story but it will need something to help it stand out. Short films are extremely hard to produce well (I should know as I’m about to finish one myself) and warrant an additional consideration before you start work on one.
If this is a writing exercise and is not intended for production, spending the time developing and writing it will be worthwhile. However, if this is intended to be produced, it would be better to differentiate it from the other recently successful short film that came before it.
That’s not to say this won’t necessarily be a good film or an interesting story, but to achieve the goals that most filmmakers set out to achieve with shorts the story could use an additional layer to make it unique. Not sure what exactly that would be, but it’s worth considering how you can do more with this premise.
See less“Claudia V?zquez is the most prestigious and reputed parapsychologist in Spain today, who from her early years until her maturity will not stop from facing the paranormal, until having a surprising and disconcerting final confrontation.”
As DPG wrote, you're missing the key ingredients of a plot in the logline. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more information.
As DPG wrote, you’re missing the key ingredients of a plot in the logline.
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.
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