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A phone operator at a suicide prevention hotline becomes overwhelmed when three desperate people all call at the same time. *SHORT*
With respect, the same subject matter has been used in a short that was nominated for an Oscar: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K2KhbFGsfQY Not sure how much better one could hope to make another film about the same subject in the same format. Just saiyn' better to know now than after you start workRead more
With respect, the same subject matter has been used in a short that was nominated for an Oscar:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K2KhbFGsfQY
Not sure how much better one could hope to make another film about the same subject in the same format.
Just saiyn’ better to know now than after you start working on it.
See lessA lat-night diner waitress bites off more than she can chew when she tries role-playing with two estranged brothers.
What DPG wrote. The central problem of her story isn't clear. What is at stake for the MC and what MUST she achieve by the end of the story?
What DPG wrote.
The central problem of her story isn’t clear. What is at stake for the MC and what MUST she achieve by the end of the story?
See lessAfter he spoils a shipment of drugs, newly-wed Jim must pay back the value in full after the drug’s owners kidnap his brother-in-law.
Agreed with DPG.It seems as though the inciting incident is the brother in law being kidnapped, best you start by describing that and then move on to the actions he takes in response.Also, wouldn't it be more of a stake from them to kidnap his wife or child?
Agreed with DPG.
It seems as though the inciting incident is the brother in law being kidnapped, best you start by describing that and then move on to the actions he takes in response.
Also, wouldn’t it be more of a stake from them to kidnap his wife or child?
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