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When an Iwi investor whanagungatanga is threatened, he must relinquish his fears at a maximum personal cost and risk to encounter a spiritual revelation that awakens his true identity in God.
I admire and identify with your resolve. However, no amount of tenacity or good intentions can change the truth, and I must refer you to the previous comments given to you on this thread as they almost all still apply. I encourage you to also read the 'Formula' tab and study other posts on this siteRead more
I admire and identify with your resolve. However, no amount of tenacity or good intentions can change the truth, and I must refer you to the previous comments given to you on this thread as they almost all still apply. I encourage you to also read the ‘Formula’ tab and study other posts on this site.
All the best.
See lessA gifted young aid worker tormented by his dreams is thrust into a world where he learns humanity has been manipulated for aeons. He must learn to master his gift to save humanity and the people he loves.
Happysnapper, All the comments made to the first version still apply - the plot is vague and the story unclear. Below are a few questions that will pop into most decision makers minds. No need to answer them here in a reply to the thread, best you read other loglines and learn how other writers useRead more
Happysnapper,
All the comments made to the first version still apply – the plot is vague and the story unclear.
Below are a few questions that will pop into most decision makers minds. No need to answer them here in a reply to the thread, best you read other loglines and learn how other writers use specific events and details to clearly describe their stories.
What does young aid worker mean?
See lessIs he 18 yo, 21yo, 25yo, 30yo?
How does him being young help or hinder his efforts?
How is him being an aid worker connected to him saving the world?
How does him being tormented by his dreams connect to the plot?
What does “…been manipulated for eons…” mean in practical terms?
What’s the worst that will happen should he fail?
What motivated him to save humanity? What specific event?
What does accepting the past mean in practical terms? What must he actually do?
What does save the future mean in practical terms? Who’s future?
Which goal does he care about most? Save the world or save the people he loves?
When a hopeless romantic student meets his holiday romance in Hong Kong by accident, he takes her out to similar spots like 10 years ago, hoping to spark her interest again before he leaves in 12 hours. (short film)
The obstacle is not clear. If he truly loves her, he'll bite the bullet and cancel the plane ticket to stay with her. Why not give him a moral dilemma? What if? He is engaged and his fiance is waiting for him to return from a business trip in time for their wedding. But he falls in love with his higRead more
The obstacle is not clear. If he truly loves her, he’ll bite the bullet and cancel the plane ticket to stay with her.
Why not give him a moral dilemma? What if? He is engaged and his fiance is waiting for him to return from a business trip in time for their wedding. But he falls in love with his high school sweetheart in Hong Kong and must find out if she feels the same before canceling the ticket and sticking around or flying back to a woman he feels obliged to marry.
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