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With society stuck in the past, a transgender girl struggles to cope with the reinstated bathroom ban.
In addition, one of the guiding principles of this site is to help others. Therefore, we ask you provide constructive criticism to at least two other loglines for every one of your own. Seeing as that has been ignored up until now, any further posts of new loglines will be deleted unless you critiquRead more
In addition, one of the guiding principles of this site is to help others. Therefore, we ask you provide constructive criticism to at least two other loglines for every one of your own. Seeing as that has been ignored up until now, any further posts of new loglines will be deleted unless you critique the required amount.
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It's hard to tell if your posts are genuine requests for help with concepts and loglines or not, simply as the number of them indicates that you're working on as many scripts. I suggest you use this forum to focus on one or two concepts at a time, get comments then implement them and improve with eaRead more
It’s hard to tell if your posts are genuine requests for help with concepts and loglines or not, simply as the number of them indicates that you’re working on as many scripts. I suggest you use this forum to focus on one or two concepts at a time, get comments then implement them and improve with each attempt.
As with your other posts, this one lacks the story critical elements a logline needs. It would be best for you to check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar for more information.
See lessWith society stuck in the past, a transgender girl struggles to cope with the reinstated bathroom ban.
Agreed with Foxtrot25.On a side note, this logline lacks a plot and comes across as an attempt to jump on an agenda band wagon, and most gate-keepers would see right through it. You would do more justice to LGBT issues if you were to structure a plot and tell a compelling story.
Agreed with Foxtrot25.
On a side note, this logline lacks a plot and comes across as an attempt to jump on an agenda band wagon, and most gate-keepers would see right through it. You would do more justice to LGBT issues if you were to structure a plot and tell a compelling story.
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