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When his devout daughter is possessed by the spirits of two revengeful children in order to exact revenge on their remorseless nurse, an accused and suspended priest must pull himself together and exorcise her before she kills the nurse- who happens to be his wife.
Agreed with most of the above - the loglie is too wordy and the narrative it describes is slightly confusing. What do you mean with "...an accused and suspended priest..." accused of what? Child molesting? Murder? Fraud? Has he just been accused or has he been convicted? To a large extent, this woulRead more
Agreed with most of the above – the loglie is too wordy and the narrative it describes is slightly confusing.
What do you mean with “…an accused and suspended priest…” accused of what? Child molesting? Murder? Fraud? Has he just been accused or has he been convicted?
To a large extent, this would form the image of the character in the audience’s mind as either a victim or aggressor. Therefore, you’d need to clarify this in the logline.
See lessLos Angeles, 1988: When his estranged daughter needs money for drama school, an ex-master criminal turned stuntman plans an elaborate heist during the filming of an elaborate heist movie known as ?Die Hard?.
As Richiev's example demonstrates, to help with empathy, you'll need an out of the ordinary event to motivate him and a noble goal. Otherwise, he's just a thief doing his thing, which in its own right isn't very interesting.
As Richiev’s example demonstrates, to help with empathy, you’ll need an out of the ordinary event to motivate him and a noble goal. Otherwise, he’s just a thief doing his thing, which in its own right isn’t very interesting.
See lessMinutes after a woman flies solo into motherhood with artificial insemination, she meets Mr. Right who thinks she’s his dream girl–but isn’t ready for children.
"...The flick got a middling 5.3 rating at IMDB. The critics green tomatoed it (18) and the audience threw half ripe tomatoes (48). The movie barely made it?s budget back, and that was probably thanks of the star, JLo..." Rather telling, don't you think... Oh come on, it's me! Yup, the logline faildRead more
“…The flick got a middling 5.3 rating at IMDB. The critics green tomatoed it (18) and the audience threw half ripe tomatoes (48). The movie barely made it?s budget back, and that was probably thanks of the star, JLo…”
Rather telling, don’t you think…
Oh come on, it’s me!
Yup, the logline faild to arouse interest in me, and it seems the film followed suit. This sounds like a good example of how a lack of conflict results in a bland story and logline.
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