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See lessWhen introverted twins experiences racially motivated harassment from their white classmates and one is sexually assaulted by their school counselor, the twins seeks revenge by hunting everyone who mistreated them.
Outright revenge is a negative goal and normally lacks genuine heroic qualities. Many revenge stories over the years (since The Count of Monte Cristo...) have more than just revenge for the character to pursue. Best to add a noble cause, like saving another kid from a similar fate. Other thanRead more
Outright revenge is a negative goal and normally lacks genuine heroic qualities. Many revenge stories over the years (since The Count of Monte Cristo…) have more than just revenge for the character to pursue. Best to add a noble cause, like saving another kid from a similar fate.
Other than that, this seems like a generic racial drama, what about this narrative separates it from the many other similar stories already told?
Lastly, it would be better to choose one inciting event (either racial or sexual harassment) and one MC for your story.
See lessAfter abandoning his family, a reclusive fugitive must come out of hiding in order to save his son, who has been kidnapped by his vengeful ex-partner in crime.
Quick fix up:After his ex-partner in crime kidnaps his son, a reclusive fugitive must hunt down the hideout to save his boy's life.Start with the inciting event then describe the MC and goal. In this instance, the action seems unclear. What is the MC going to do in order to save his son?
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After his ex-partner in crime kidnaps his son, a reclusive fugitive must hunt down the hideout to save his boy’s life.
Start with the inciting event then describe the MC and goal. In this instance, the action seems unclear. What is the MC going to do in order to save his son?
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