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  1. Posted: July 5, 2017In: Drama

    On the eve of 100 years of Indian Cinema – a film receives an award for being the best Hindi film of the century, but no one claims the award. Intrigued by this fact, an enthusiastic film journalist embarks on a journey to find out what happened to the maker of this classic Through this journey he realizes what hardships, sufferings, and pains went in making that film.

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    Added an answer on July 9, 2017 at 1:02 pm

    Agreed with Dkpough1, the premise stretches believability. Perhaps you could specify the writer or director as the central enigmatic character who faild to show? More so, the reason for the journalist to find the missing person/persons needs to be more compelling. To raise the stakes, could they havRead more

    Agreed with Dkpough1, the premise stretches believability. Perhaps you could specify the writer or director as the central enigmatic character who faild to show?

    More so, the reason for the journalist to find the missing person/persons needs to be more compelling. To raise the stakes, could they have been a familymemberr of the journalist?

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  2. Posted: July 5, 2017In: Drama

    While escaping a terrorist attack , two biggest female business rivals discover that they are homosexual . For the world they can’t stay together and for them they can’t live apart.

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    Added an answer on July 9, 2017 at 12:58 pm

    This, like your many other concepts, sets up a situation, and much like Dkpough1 pointed out, lacks a clear goal.Perhaps best if you tuddied the 'Formula' tab up top and read more reviews on this site before posting any more loglines. This way you'll likely have a clearer understanding of crucial loRead more

    This, like your many other concepts, sets up a situation, and much like Dkpough1 pointed out, lacks a clear goal.

    Perhaps best if you tuddied the ‘Formula’ tab up top and read more reviews on this site before posting any more loglines. This way you’ll likely have a clearer understanding of crucial logline components.

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  3. Posted: July 5, 2017In: Comedy

    A young orphan boy in India receives a letter through which it is revealed that he has inherited some treasure which has been lying buried in his ancestral home in Pakistan. When he illegally reaches there he finds out that this old dilapidated burnt down house is now a terrorist camp .

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    Added an answer on July 9, 2017 at 12:45 pm

    This reads like a good setup, but what is his objective goal as a result of it? His actions are what's going to make this an interesting story, so best focus on his actions and goal - the essentials for a plot.

    This reads like a good setup, but what is his objective goal as a result of it?

    His actions are what’s going to make this an interesting story, so best focus on his actions and goal – the essentials for a plot.

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