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When a self-absorbed desert-trawling truckie falls for a devoted mother and city writer online, he must take responsibility for his own son, before winning her heart or losing his last chance for true love.
Agreed with all the above! Hi Louise... What is the cause and effect relationship connecting his action of taking responsibility for his own son and his ability to win the woman's heart? This seems like a crucial part of the plot but is currently unclear. Also, what does "...take responsibility forRead more
Agreed with all the above!
Hi Louise…
What is the cause and effect relationship connecting his action of taking responsibility for his own son and his ability to win the woman’s heart?
This seems like a crucial part of the plot but is currently unclear.
Also, what does “…take responsibility for his own son…” look like? What does this mean in terms of cinematic action?
See lessA rewrite: When a young Muslim emigrant woman finds love with a Norwegian man, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs.
If anything, I suggest raising the stakes and obstacles by having her not only fall in love with another man but a Jewish man...
If anything, I suggest raising the stakes and obstacles by having her not only fall in love with another man but a Jewish man…
See lessA rewrite: When a young Muslim emigrant woman finds love with a Norwegian man, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs.
Where is the story located? If it is in a Muslim country, I can see how dishonoring a family will be a problem. However if it isn't, it doesn't sound like a big enough obstacle as there are no wide spread implications for the family.
Where is the story located? If it is in a Muslim country, I can see how dishonoring a family will be a problem. However if it isn’t, it doesn’t sound like a big enough obstacle as there are no wide spread implications for the family.
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