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When they plot to kill each other the following day, a white supremacist and a black racist rather wake up in each other’s body and must team up and solve the problem or get killed by their gang members.
It's safe to say that body switching souls has become a bit of a trope. It, therefore, doesn't really matter for this kind of film how they switch (lighting, magic potion or voodoo spell) what does is the ensuing complication.? This actually sounds interesting, while not original, it may have an audRead more
It’s safe to say that body switching souls has become a bit of a trope. It, therefore, doesn’t really matter for this kind of film how they switch (lighting, magic potion or voodoo spell) what does is the ensuing complication.? This actually sounds interesting, while not original, it may have an audience.
See lessWhen a devastating drought threatens to annihilate his people,a boy finding himself in a magical world, where a holier-than-thou general has conquered the makers of the rain, must device battle plans to topple him from within and without, to save his world.
Agreed with the above comments. Redraft the logline with a cause and effect relationship in mind. In other words - as a result of an event, a character must achieve a goal. When you write "...When a devastating drought threatens to annihilate his people..." this is actually not true. It's not the drRead more
Agreed with the above comments.
Redraft the logline with a cause and effect relationship in mind. In other words – as a result of an event, a character must achieve a goal.
When you write “…When a devastating drought threatens to annihilate his people…” this is actually not true. It’s not the drought but the general who threatens to annihilate his people by using a magical drought.
For example:
See lessAfter a crazed general conquers the mystical rainmakers, a simple farm boy must raise a rebellion to defeat the general and save his land from drought.
In a fantasy world he creates, an aspiring young actor lives his life as an acclaimed star but is unable to live like this in the real world because he fears he isn’t really good enough.
Listen to Richiev. Your logline is lacking the most important element of a plot - a goal. Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar. Think of a logline as a simple statement of a need and obstacle, this way the reader can easily understand what the conflict will be. Start off with an inciting incidRead more
Listen to Richiev.
Your logline is lacking the most important element of a plot – a goal. Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar.
Think of a logline as a simple statement of a need and obstacle, this way the reader can easily understand what the conflict will be.
Start off with an inciting incident, which will motivate the main character to NEED to achieve a goal. If you have an actor as the MC what event would motivate him to have to achieve a specific goal?
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