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When the evil Monster Wolf Fenris breaks free from his icy prison and escapes to Earth, the Silver Moon, an elite werewolf hunting squad must destroy him before Earth is cursed with the scourge of lycanthropy forever.
Who is the main character in this story?You describe an elite werewolf hunting squad, but who amongst them should the audience follow and develop empathy for?
Who is the main character in this story?
You describe an elite werewolf hunting squad, but who amongst them should the audience follow and develop empathy for?
See lessPitted in a spiritual batle against their evil cyborg uncle and his dark, sinister master, two spiritually gifted twin seek solace as they fight to avenge thier mother’s murder and find fabled elemental orbs.
Agreed with Richiev. Clarity is key in a logline, unfortunately, it's severely lacking in this case. Here are a few of the questions this logline raises, which put the concept into doubt: If he's a cyborg why would he be affected by a spiritual fight? What is a spiritual fight? Is the uncle the antaRead more
Agreed with Richiev.
Clarity is key in a logline, unfortunately, it’s severely lacking in this case.
Here are a few of the questions this logline raises, which put the concept into doubt:
If he’s a cyborg why would he be affected by a spiritual fight?
What is a spiritual fight?
Is the uncle the antagonist or his dark master?
Why two main characters when the plot could work just as well with one?
Which is their primary goal; to find solace, defeat the antagonist or find the orbs?
See lessAfter his feminist wife comes in possession of a gun that belongs to the mafia , a timid man has to stop and fight the mafia that they are now running from, and save his failing marriage in the process.
The inciting incident is them witnessing a mafia murder. Why is her wanting to go to the police a problem for the husband? This is the best thing they can do, unless, of course, he is a member of a rival mafia.
The inciting incident is them witnessing a mafia murder. Why is her wanting to go to the police a problem for the husband? This is the best thing they can do, unless, of course, he is a member of a rival mafia.
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