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An awkward, young man attempts to dissuade his imaginary friend from accompanying him on a first date, only to find he’s not the only one with an overactive imagination.
Agreed with DPG and Richiev. I'll add that the obstacle isn't clear.? This sounds like a short film and as such gives you the ability for a smaller scope.? However, don't discount the importance of a solid plot, in other words, define a clear goal and obstacle for the guy. If the story is about himRead more
Agreed with DPG and Richiev.
I’ll add that the obstacle isn’t clear.? This sounds like a short film and as such gives you the ability for a smaller scope.? However, don’t discount the importance of a solid plot, in other words, define a clear goal and obstacle for the guy.
If the story is about him trying to persuade the imaginary friend to go away, then it will take place before the date. If this is the case, what is the obstacle for him stopping the imaginary friend from attending?
What is his obstacle in this case?
If the story is about him on the date already, and during the evening trying to get the imaginary friend to bugger off, then the obstacle is clear and need not be elaborated on.
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There is no causal connection between the inciting incident and goal - she is diagnosed, and then must (?) win a competition. Why must she win? If, however, she was already the linchpin in a team of gamers and there was a lot riding on them winning but then she gets diagnosed, then the pressure is oRead more
There is no causal connection between the inciting incident and goal – she is diagnosed, and then must (?) win a competition. Why must she win?
If, however, she was already the linchpin in a team of gamers and there was a lot riding on them winning but then she gets diagnosed, then the pressure is on and she MUST win with in a month or else.
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Agreed with Richiev. What does the woman want? What is her goal? What is her flaw? In essence, this is a situation, not a plot.
Agreed with Richiev.
What does the woman want? What is her goal?
What is her flaw?
In essence, this is a situation, not a plot.
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