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When his grandmother sets him up with a man they?ve just met, an architect must decide between a loveless relationship and reinventing himself to complete The Playground and reclaim himself ? and the man he loves.
No amount of adjectives and descriptions will make up for the lack of obstacle. I appreciate the supposed sentimental obstacle - the long term relationship, but?in movie terms, it isn't enough to make this a tough choice. The reason is that outside of a?few fleeting uncomfortable emotions there areRead more
No amount of adjectives and descriptions will make up for the lack of obstacle. I appreciate the supposed sentimental obstacle – the long term relationship, but?in movie terms, it isn’t enough to make this a tough choice. The reason is that outside of a?few fleeting uncomfortable emotions there are no stakes. I like Richiev’s suggestion of putting him in a straight relationship this, while slightly cliche by now, brings social stakes into the premise.
I get that you want to write an ‘all gay’ story, but like many other romance movies, gay or straight, it’s always a challenge to introduce stakes and obstacles into the story. Perhaps it would be best to expand your scope to include a straight relationship hurdle for the MC.
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Agreed with the above. I suggest researching other films with a similar premise to see how the writer built the world around the character that made it a must do or die. For example: Kinky Boots, The Full Monty, Saving Grace, etc...
Agreed with the above.
I suggest researching other films with a similar premise to see how the writer built the world around the character that made it a must do or die. For example: Kinky Boots, The Full Monty, Saving Grace, etc…
See lessA reworking of a previous attempt: A shy teenager makes a breakthrough into an underground art scene, but struggles to maintain her creativity after being treated for her mental illness.
What's her goal? And what's standing in her way?
What’s her goal? And what’s standing in her way?
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