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With her main bread winner in rehab, and now facing bankruptcy, former child star sensation turned celebrity agent, Dolcie Dunn, must battle her industry rivals, scandal and a dysfunctional family to save her sanity and her business from financial ruin.
I suggest you study the recommendations in the 'Formula' tab. There is no need to mention a character's name and the word count should be 30 or under. Other than that, what is it the MC specifically wants? Her goal is unclear from the descriptions as they mention her wanting to save her sanity and hRead more
I suggest you study the recommendations in the ‘Formula’ tab. There is no need to mention a character’s name and the word count should be 30 or under.
Other than that, what is it the MC specifically wants? Her goal is unclear from the descriptions as they mention her wanting to save her sanity and her business, but which one is it that drives the plot?
The back story of what she was prior to being an agent is irrelevant and can be cut, what is missing, however, is the inciting incident. What specifically was the single event that motivated her to take action at the start of the story?
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Be warned aginst an 'it was all a dream' plot. The old 'it's all in the character's head' story has been done many times and to great success, which means the demands on an upcoming writer trying to emulate said success are so high that it would be very difficult to pull off a script centered aroundRead more
Be warned aginst an ‘it was all a dream’ plot.
The old ‘it’s all in the character’s head’ story has been done many times and to great success, which means the demands on an upcoming writer trying to emulate said success are so high that it would be very difficult to pull off a script centered around this trope.
That aside, it’s unclear what her goal is, what is driving her to take action in this story?
Secondly, what event initially motivates her to take action, what is her inciting incident?
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What Richiev said. Also, loglines are meant to describe plots and a plot is best defined within a finite amount of time - a start point and an end point. The start here, or the inciting incident, is the coins being found but what is the end point or goal? What will the characters in this story strivRead more
What Richiev said.
Also, loglines are meant to describe plots and a plot is best defined within a finite amount of time – a start point and an end point. The start here, or the inciting incident, is the coins being found but what is the end point or goal? What will the characters in this story strive to achieve?
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