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A pacified Viking warrior must pickup his sword and raise an army to rescue his son from an unlikely enemy hellbent on enslaving all of Scandinavia: unicorns.
Reverse the order of events to indicate the cause and effect: After his son is taken by an unlikely enemy, unicorns, hell bent on enslaving all of Scandinavia, a retired Viking warrior must pick up his sword to save his boy and his people.
Reverse the order of events to indicate the cause and effect:
After his son is taken by an unlikely enemy, unicorns, hell bent on enslaving all of Scandinavia, a retired Viking warrior must pick up his sword to save his boy and his people.
See lessWhen a desperate father loses access to his only child, he attempts to take matters into his own hands, only to find himself taken hostage by his vindictive ex-wife.
Feuding parents has been done before, and very well (Kramer v Kramer for one), I tend to agree with DPG the kidnapping parents adds a hook of interest. I suggest re-thinking this concept with the idea that the mother taking the father is the inciting incident. I'd also raise the stakes and make it mRead more
Feuding parents has been done before, and very well (Kramer v Kramer for one), I tend to agree with DPG the kidnapping parents adds a hook of interest. I suggest re-thinking this concept with the idea that the mother taking the father is the inciting incident. I’d also raise the stakes and make it more than one child.
For example:
After being taken hostage by his ex-wife a father who lost custody must break free to save his children.
See less?A cop and his K-9 companion unintentionally hijack a billion dollar drug shipment from a ruthless cartel that will stop at nothing to get it back.
Agreed with Dkpough1 and DPG.I think a location would also help. Where are they? In New Mexico? And by cartel you mean a Mexican Cartel? If so mention Mexican Cartel - it will help clarify the dangers and the nature of the antagonists.I'll add that for some reason the fact that the MC is with his K9Read more
Agreed with Dkpough1 and DPG.
I think a location would also help. Where are they? In New Mexico? And by cartel you mean a Mexican Cartel? If so mention Mexican Cartel – it will help clarify the dangers and the nature of the antagonists.
I’ll add that for some reason the fact that the MC is with his K9 best friend made it seem like a comedy more than like an action flick, perhaps change it to action/comedy.
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