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When a humiliated teen gets the ability to see the desires of anyone he touches, he gets a shot at outmaneuvering the girl who brought him down.
There is an agreed upon convention in fairytales - magic powers don't need any explanations.? I believe the same applies to your MC, you can let his magic powers live as they are with no need to expand much time on explaining their origin. However, the same rule doesn't apply to the use of the powerRead more
There is an agreed upon convention in fairytales – magic powers don’t need any explanations.? I believe the same applies to your MC, you can let his magic powers live as they are with no need to expand much time on explaining their origin. However, the same rule doesn’t apply to the use of the powers.
Whatever it is the MC does it must be an integrated part of the plot, in other words, as a result of him gaining these powers he will now do an interesting action, which he couldn’t have otherwise, in order to achieve a particular goal. You need to describe said action and goal for the logline to make sense.
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Agreed with DPG. I suggest you read the 'Formula' tab on the top bar. There are several key components a logline needs which are missing in this post.
Agreed with DPG.
I suggest you read the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar. There are several key components a logline needs which are missing in this post.
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If the rap artist is the main character then she should be portrayed as such, describe what action she MUST take to achieve the obvious goal of survival. Currently it reads like a multi-protagonist plot.
If the rap artist is the main character then she should be portrayed as such, describe what action she MUST take to achieve the obvious goal of survival. Currently it reads like a multi-protagonist plot.
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