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A roadie for the greatest band in the galaxy struggles to recover a time machine hidden within Elvis Presley?s Graceland in order to defeat an alien psychopath hellbent on destroying the Milky Way.
The causal connection between the various parts of the logline is unclear. What is the inciting incident that make shim NEED to take action?
The causal connection between the various parts of the logline is unclear.
What is the inciting incident that make shim NEED to take action?
See lessIn 1980s California, a streetwise stoner braves the hidden world of the suburban mafia as he searches for the truth about his biological father.
This logline lacks some plot critical information, bellow are a few questions I suggest you try and answer in the next draft: Why now? What's the inciting incident that forces him to find the truth? What is this truth that he is searching for??What is it the stoner doesn't know?? The father's identiRead more
This logline lacks some plot critical information, bellow are a few questions I suggest you try and answer in the next draft:
Why now? What’s the inciting incident that forces him to find the truth?
What is this truth that he is searching for??What is it the stoner doesn’t know?? The father’s identity? Where he is?
Why does he NEED to find out the truth about his father? What are the stakes?
See lessWhen a young ward of the state is fostered to a crazy family planning a heist, he sets out to find his real father before being forced to engage in criminal activities that will see him back in juvenile prison.
The freedom to express one's thoughts is a fundamental building block of modern society, therefore segregating the ability to write about certain subjects and characters as privileges belonging to only one particular culture and not another is wrong.? In other words, anyone can write any story - thaRead more
The freedom to express one’s thoughts is a fundamental building block of modern society, therefore segregating the ability to write about certain subjects and characters as privileges belonging to only one particular culture and not another is wrong.? In other words, anyone can write any story – that’s the beauty of story.
I urge you to explore any subject matter, theme or culture as long as it is a story necessity. However, for greater authenticaty, you would need to do your research and consult with individuals of a particular culture you’re writing about.
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