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A spy with a big mouth must destroy an enemy radar station before more planes are shot down.
By big mouth, I presume you mean talks a lot and a tell-all instead of a Jagger-like facial feature. If this is so, how can he or she be a spy? Wouldn't secretes be at the very base of a spy's job? Secondly, more detail is required to make sense of the stakes. Are these military planes? Civilian plaRead more
By big mouth, I presume you mean talks a lot and a tell-all instead of a Jagger-like facial feature. If this is so, how can he or she be a spy? Wouldn’t secretes be at the very base of a spy’s job? Secondly, more detail is required to make sense of the stakes. Are these military planes? Civilian plains? Cargo carriers? Is it Air Force One that will be at risk? Will stopping this station help end the war?
See lessAfter forgetting to bring Vegemite a group of tourists in the Australian bush land are set upon by carnivorous drop bears and must find a way to survive.
In my optimism, I choose to read this as a genuine post... Hoping it is; The events seem disconnected from each other - how can the lack of vegemite bring about a vicious Koala attack?? And by vicious, I mean cute and furry... Also, is there one main character you could specify instead of a group maRead more
In my optimism, I choose to read this as a genuine post…
Hoping it is;
The events seem disconnected from each other – how can the lack of vegemite bring about a vicious Koala attack?? And by vicious, I mean cute and furry…
Also, is there one main character you could specify instead of a group made up of an arbitrary number of characters?
See lessWhen an engaged CEO has a reunion with her student friends, she meets her then-lover and they fall in love again, but she has to make a decision before leaving the town in four days.
The lead up to the point in time that a decision is made, i.e the deliberation, can take a while but the moment of deciding is very short. Is this story about her deliberating whether or not to leave her fiance? Or is this story about her deciding to leave him for another man? If the former, it willRead more
The lead up to the point in time that a decision is made, i.e the deliberation, can take a while but the moment of deciding is very short. Is this story about her deliberating whether or not to leave her fiance? Or is this story about her deciding to leave him for another man?
See lessIf the former, it will be a low concept slow plot, as DPG suggested, best externalized with side characters and it runs the risk of being melodramatic.
If the latter, then the goal needs to be clarified – what MUST she achieve as a result of her decision to leave the fiance? Moving overseas feels like she’s running away from her problems instead of facing them.