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When an agoraphobic author meets his dream girl, a country star, he starts a therapy, but he must join her in public appearances or risks losing her to smarter guys.
So does she love him or not?If she loves him, why would he need to 'fight' for her?? Other men wouldn't pose a threat if they are truly in love, but if only he loves her then that statement would make sense. If the love is one sided, then his, motivation to get over his agoraphobia is also warrantedRead more
So does she love him or not?
If she loves him, why would he need to ‘fight’ for her?? Other men wouldn’t pose a threat if they are truly in love, but if only he loves her then that statement would make sense. If the love is one sided, then his, motivation to get over his agoraphobia is also warranted and fits in with a hero’s journey paradigm – he must overcome his flaw in order to achieve his outer goal.
Also, while I agree with Erica about the need for clarity and user-friendly words, I think agoraphobia is a commonly enough understood a condition to use in a logline and doesn’t need to be changed.
See lessA movie star plagued by scandal quits his Hollywood life and moves to Australia to find a new purpose.
Agreed with the above. Also, find purpose in Australia? Of all places? Really? I'de understand if he went to the Alaskan wilderness or a monastery in Nepal or even, cliche as it may be, an Ashram in India, but Down Under doesn't sound plausible. Maybe it's just me.
Agreed with the above.
Also, find purpose in Australia? Of all places? Really?
I’de understand if he went to the Alaskan wilderness or a monastery in Nepal or even, cliche as it may be, an Ashram in India, but Down Under doesn’t sound plausible. Maybe it’s just me.
See lessON THE BRINK OF DEFEAT, THE ARMY TURNS TO AN HONOR BOUND PILOT TO RISK COURT-MARTIAL AND THE LIVES OF HIS CREW.
To do what? Without a specific goal, the plot is unclear. In addition best to specify a single event that brought about them being on the brink of defeat - an inciting incident.
To do what?
Without a specific goal, the plot is unclear.
In addition best to specify a single event that brought about them being on the brink of defeat – an inciting incident.
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