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  1. Posted: December 3, 2016In: Comedy

    PALEO When her boss at a wild game restaurant turns into a Neanderthal, a vegetarian waitress must solve the puzzle of evolution to escape with her life.

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    Added an answer on December 19, 2016 at 8:09 am

    Hey Octavia. Good points above, I think that it could use a description of the cause for the change. It seems a bit strange that out of the blue, with no major event taking place, the transformation happens. What was the magic that caused the transformation?

    Hey Octavia.

    Good points above, I think that it could use a description of the cause for the change. It seems a bit strange that out of the blue, with no major event taking place, the transformation happens.

    What was the magic that caused the transformation?

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  2. Posted: December 4, 2016In: Thriller

    When an Iraq War vet loses both his house and wife, he resolves to use his training to take out the CEO of a major NYC investment bank whom he blames for his losses and whose security detail is mostly composed of other vets.

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    Added an answer on December 19, 2016 at 8:02 am

    Is this the plot of The Big Short? I don't know... that was more about the Doctor turned stock broker not an Iraq War vet. The inciting incident needs to be described as a motivating event i.e: After his bank manager forecloses on his house an Iraq war vet loses his wife, he then seeks revenge by...

    Is this the plot of The Big Short? I don’t know… that was more about the Doctor turned stock broker not an Iraq War vet.

    The inciting incident needs to be described as a motivating event i.e: After his bank manager forecloses on his house an Iraq war vet loses his wife, he then seeks revenge by…

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  3. Posted: December 17, 2016In: Thriller

    An esoteric detective is recruited to find a pregnant woman?s killer, and a struggling rock and roll band holds the key to the mystery.

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    Added an answer on December 19, 2016 at 7:45 am

    Agreed with Karel. The causality between the events sounds tenuous. Also, how is a detective recruited? Isn't it his or her job to catch criminals? It would just be another day at work for the detective.? To that matter, what is so unusual about the detective getting a case to solve? Maybe I'm missiRead more

    Agreed with Karel.
    The causality between the events sounds tenuous.

    Also, how is a detective recruited? Isn’t it his or her job to catch criminals? It would just be another day at work for the detective.? To that matter, what is so unusual about the detective getting a case to solve? Maybe I’m missing something, but what is the out of the ordinary event that motivates this character to take action?

    Just one last note, I think Rock n’ Roll is a bit out of date. A quick google search revealed that kids, nowadays, use something more like: Synthpop, Dance-rock, electronic rock, new wave, Alternative R&B, French Elctro, the list goes on.

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