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The Examiner, is a thriller about an emotionally stressed widower and single parent bank examiner, who investigating a multi-billion dollar financial fraud,discover that all clues lead to himself and must find the imposter before a determined anti-fraud unit officer catches up with him.This becomes increasingly difficult because the imposter- happens to be the way ward son he is struggling to control , being forced by an ex-convict bank manager on a revenge course..
Agreed with DPG.Look at the Training tab on the top bar of this website, it may help you understand the preferred structure? for a logline.A significant and out of the ordinary event motivates a flawed character to take action in order to achieve a compelling goal.Fundamentally, you only need to desRead more
Agreed with DPG.
Look at the Training tab on the top bar of this website, it may help you understand the preferred structure? for a logline.
A significant and out of the ordinary event motivates a flawed character to take action in order to achieve a compelling goal.
Fundamentally, you only need to describe a motivating event and an inciting incident – in your case him being framed, and a goal – in your case catching the culprit.? Best to keep the logline under 30 words, and be sure to be clear about who does what.
See lessWanting to be independent of her abusive alcoholic father a teen takes driving lessons with her pensioner neighbour discovery the father figure she needs and caring really means.
Sounds very low concept and low stakes.Take Harold and Maude as an example of a similar dynamic (only with the gender reversed), both the teen and the pensioner were, each for their own reasons, emotionally damaged. Their relationship became the saving grace for both of them - they found happiness aRead more
Sounds very low concept and low stakes.
Take Harold and Maude as an example of a similar dynamic (only with the gender reversed), both the teen and the pensioner were, each for their own reasons, emotionally damaged. Their relationship became the saving grace for both of them – they found happiness and a renewed lease on life with each other. The stakes were that this was going to be taken away from them because society frowned on their relationship.
What is the equivalent in this concept? what’s the worst that will happen should the teenager not get a drivers license? What’s the best that would happen?
If the father is abusive, now day and age with social help, the teen can find a different home to live in or the father will be removed. A licence can hardly substitute the authorities intervention.
See less“When her drink is spiked at a party a virgin finds herself pregnant and a seminary student is the father. Together they must go through hell to find a piece of heaven.”
Agreed with the above. Also, there seems to be a lack of high stakes. What is at stake and for whom? If she wants to keep the baby, no problem. If she doesn't want to keep the baby, she can have an abortion. Sure it isn't pleasant, but the ramifications aren't great - these things happen.
Agreed with the above.
Also, there seems to be a lack of high stakes. What is at stake and for whom?
See lessIf she wants to keep the baby, no problem. If she doesn’t want to keep the baby, she can have an abortion. Sure it isn’t pleasant, but the ramifications aren’t great – these things happen.