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An outcast teenager teams up with his high school bully to take down the spirit of Al Capone, who has possessed a small Indiana town to rebuild his empire.
All comments made to the previous draft of this logline still apply.
All comments made to the previous draft of this logline still apply.
See lessAs she repeatedly travels back to a Georgia in 1815 from Chicago in 2016, a black woman must figure out how to stop time traveling before a ruthless plantation owner ends up killing her.
Interesting idea and good clear stakes, but you're missing the basis for the premise and a good inciting incident. Perhaps she needs to get trapped in a time vortex and, much like in Quantum Leap, needs to break free in modern day in order to survive. Other wise she can simply not travel to Georgia,Read more
Interesting idea and good clear stakes, but you’re missing the basis for the premise and a good inciting incident.
Perhaps she needs to get trapped in a time vortex and, much like in Quantum Leap, needs to break free in modern day in order to survive. Other wise she can simply not travel to Georgia, so best to make the event that started the story out of her control and demanding of her to act on.
See lessWhen a passionate playwright finds his muse in a romantic, young woman, disguised as a male actor, they engage in an affair behind the scenes of the production of Romeo and Juliet under the jealous suspicion of the annoying noble to which her aristocratic family has betrothed her.
Agreed with most of what DPG and Moses99 wrote, but I think the logline can indicate more action: After Shakespeare hits a writer's block he must find?inspiration in a passionate affair with a young royal, betrothed to another, if he is to write Romeo and Juliet.
Agreed with most of what DPG and Moses99 wrote, but I think the logline can indicate more action:
After Shakespeare hits a writer’s block he must find?inspiration in a passionate affair with a young royal, betrothed to another, if he is to write Romeo and Juliet.
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