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A rebellious teen?s family goes missing. During her search for them, she uncovers a government conspiracy to end all religion.
I think an antagonist and flaw would help make this a more compelling concept.Not sure rebellious is quite the best choice, what other flaw could you give her that would make it harder for her to achieve her goal?Secondly is there a bad guy or gal? I think it would be better to make her face an oppoRead more
I think an antagonist and flaw would help make this a more compelling concept.
Not sure rebellious is quite the best choice, what other flaw could you give her that would make it harder for her to achieve her goal?
Secondly is there a bad guy or gal? I think it would be better to make her face an opponent – a crazed government agent, or a staunch socialist. Other wise the enemy is faceless and the obstacle?unclear.
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Try answering the questions above again using no more than three?words to answer each, other wise you still don't have the necessary components for a story yet.
Try answering the questions above again using no more than three?words to answer each, other wise you still don’t have the necessary components for a story yet.
See lessIn the future, all mental Illness is illegal. After a teen?s girlfriend is taken away due to early detection of a mental defect, he searches to find an error with the brain scanning machine but uncovers a dark secret.
What dark secret? And what will he do? In other words, what is his goal? The goal is the most important part of a logline, and this one lacks a clear goal for the MC. It's understood that?he wants to clear his girlfriends name, but if he uncovers a "?dark secret?" surely that means he can help the rRead more
What dark secret? And what will he do? In other words, what is his goal?
The goal is the most important part of a logline, and this one lacks a clear goal for the MC. It’s understood that?he wants to clear his girlfriends name, but if he uncovers a “?dark secret?” surely that means he can help the rest of society. This means the stakes get much higher after his discovery, and therefore his over arching goal should be described as his response to the dark secret not helping his girlfriend.
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