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After giving a tape showing a ritual killing to a deputy. Both the tape and the deputy go missing. When he finds more tapes he needs to get them to the police and survive attacks from unknown individuals. PS: small town, he thinks the cops are involved.
The logline is a bit long and some what unclear.However from your responses to the others I got more details and clarity. Perhaps: After he uncovers a police coverup over of a series of murders, a renovator must protect the evidence he's got from the local police department and deliver it safely toRead more
The logline is a bit long and some what unclear.
However from your responses to the others I got more details and clarity.
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After he uncovers a police coverup over of a series of murders, a renovator must protect the evidence he’s got from the local police department and deliver it safely to the federal authorities.
[Revised] A manipulative cat uses trickery and the dark arts to exact revenge upon an unappreciative mother, disrupting her big presentation.
Agreed with DPG and Richiev. Also without any background knowledge of the concept a reader may not get what you mean when describing the cat as; wanting to exact revenge on a human mother. If the cat is the daughter incarnate, then it needs to be in the logline otherwise the concept parts with realiRead more
Agreed with DPG and Richiev.
See lessAlso without any background knowledge of the concept a reader may not get what you mean when describing the cat as; wanting to exact revenge on a human mother. If the cat is the daughter incarnate, then it needs to be in the logline otherwise the concept parts with reality and confuses the unsuspecting reader.
The webseries follows grief-stricken Jason Moore, a teenager whose parents have been killed as a result of a deadly disease spreading like wildfire, caused by a cosmic entity known as the Plague Doctor. Now, he plans to survive in a world where fifteen sixteenths of the population have passed on, and by the end, plans to kill the Plague Doctor, thus ending the Modern Plague once and for all.
What DPG said. I'll add that a logline for a series, web or otherwise, is best structured to describe the pilot episode. However,?if you do have a the whole season narrative plotted out, you could try and write it for a season but best to focus on the major events in the narrative just as you wouldRead more
What DPG said.
I’ll add that a logline for a series, web or otherwise, is best structured to describe the pilot episode. However,?if you do have a the whole season narrative plotted out, you could try and write it for a season but best to focus on the major events in the narrative just as you would in a film – inciting incident?and end goal.
It sounds like your inciting incident is the parents being killed, and the goal is to kill the psychotic entity.
See lessHere is my try at a logline for your season one:
After a psychotic entity kills his parents a fearful teen must fight through a post apocalyptic plague ridden world to kill the entity responsible.