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When he invents inter-dimensional video messaging, a friendless whiz kid hides his discovery from his loud and obnoxious adult colleagues to develop a friendship with an alien delinquent in peace (and quiet).
It sounds as if the inciting incident is more the colleague's discovery of the invention, best to describe it as such in the logline and as it stands now the inciting incident is his inventing the interdenominational? face time. Then the MC's goal can be made to be a reaction to what the colleague dRead more
It sounds as if the inciting incident is more the colleague’s discovery of the invention, best to describe it as such in the logline and as it stands now the inciting incident is his inventing the interdenominational? face time.
Then the MC’s goal can be made to be a reaction to what the colleague does.
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The current re draft of the logline is still confusing. If one of the key points in the logline is that he will catch the hacker ten best to specify this as his main goal instead of a secondary one. After a hacker threatens to crash his wife's plane unless he provides him with top secret access codeRead more
The current re draft of the logline is still confusing. If one of the key points in the logline is that he will catch the hacker ten best to specify this as his main goal instead of a secondary one.
After a hacker threatens to crash his wife’s plane unless he provides him with top secret access codes a security analyst must track the hacker down to save the flight.
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Agreed with the above comments. Also the action the antagonist takes, or in other words what the main character is trying to prevent is unclear. What does hunt them for their sins mean? Is the killer killing them or stealing their memories of their sins? Obviously you mean the killer is killing, butRead more
Agreed with the above comments.
Also the action the antagonist takes, or in other words what the main character is trying to prevent is unclear. What does hunt them for their sins mean? Is the killer killing them or stealing their memories of their sins? Obviously you mean the killer is killing, but the logic of a killer walking around a crowd killing them with out any body noticing or acting to stop him or her doesn’t make much sense.
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