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Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.
I find often that if a logline can't be structured well enough to read on its own, it's indicative of a problem in the story. I've come in late on this discussion, but from reading the other responses on the thread and according to?your own statement: "...?it is hard to get a handle on a logline forRead more
I find often that if a logline can’t be structured well enough to read on its own, it’s indicative of a problem in the story. I’ve come in late on this discussion, but from reading the other responses on the thread and according to?your own statement: “…?it is hard to get a handle on a logline for this story without changing the story?.”, it sounds like best to change the story.
Just an objective view of this thread, I mean nothing else by it 🙂
See lessRobots were not the cause of mankind’s destruction. Instead, they will attempt to bring us back from extinction.
Agreed with the above, best to re draft with the missing elements. On a side note, I think this is a fresh new take on the very well trodden AI concept. If done well this premise could make for a great story. Good luck, am looking forward?to the next draft, please be sure to re post a new version ofRead more
Agreed with the above, best to re draft with the missing elements.
On a side note, I think this is a fresh new take on the very well trodden AI concept.
See lessIf done well this premise could make for a great story.
Good luck, am looking forward?to the next draft, please be sure to re post a new version of an actual logline…
(REVISED) When an antisocial apocalypse ?prepper? is the only person in her small town uninfected by a virus transmitted through the trial of a ?telepathic phone?, she must stop preparing for the world?s end and start saving it.
What DPG said. Also best if you add a clearer description of her goal and action. How will she?save the town? Design a cure? Find the source of the virus? Find patient zero? What she actually does?in the story needs to be described or eluded to in the logline.
What DPG said.
Also best if you add a clearer description of her goal and action.
How will she?save the town? Design a cure? Find the source of the virus? Find patient zero?
What she actually does?in the story needs to be described or eluded to in the logline.
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