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When his buddies desert him in law-enforced territory, a fast-talking space pirate hitches a ride with an underpaid traffic officer to retrieve his precious loot.
I can't see enough action to fill a whole act 2. He hitchhikes a ride with the officer,?but?then what happens? They sit in his space car for 50 minutes until they find the bad guys? What is the resulting action? Films are often sold on the action of act 2 as it is most of the film, best if you descrRead more
I can’t see enough action to fill a whole act 2.
He hitchhikes a ride with the officer,?but?then what happens?
They sit in his space car for 50 minutes until they find the bad guys? What is the resulting action?
Films are often sold on the action of act 2 as it is most of the film, best if you describe how he plans on getting back the loot – fight, steal or con his way to it.
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When dealing with a concept for a series one of the most important elements to consider is the "dramatic mechanism", this could either be a character dynamic (Friends), a psychological condition (Dexter) or a work place requirement (30 Rock) that enables the invention of a dramatic situation in everRead more
When dealing with a concept for a series one of the most important elements to consider is the “dramatic mechanism”, this could either be a character dynamic (Friends), a psychological condition (Dexter) or a work place requirement (30 Rock) that enables the invention of a dramatic situation in every episode.
The “mechanism” I can see in your concept is the family’s need to hunt the monsters. This is good, however it needs motivation that’s currently lacking. Just as it’s clear why a priest must?fight a demon or Buffy must fight vampires, your family of monster fighting heroes need to be clearly motivated to do the voodoo that they do so well.
Perhaps describe them as descendants of ancient guardians tasked with the protection of humanity against the armies of hell. Just an option, but it explains what I mean about the need for them to be more than a Brady bunch on the hunt.
See lessAfter being attacked by a distressed mother of an obsessed fan, a girl band must escape their dressing room without being killed.
Agreed with DPG.I think you may need to have the mother hold the band hostage, this way she can take away their mobiles and cut them off from contacting the outside world by any other means.I also think that this could make for a comedy, crazy I know, but think of the princes like preciousness suchRead more
Agreed with DPG.
I think you may need to have the mother hold the band hostage, this way she can take away their mobiles and cut them off from contacting the outside world by any other means.
I also think that this could make for a comedy, crazy I know, but think of the princes like preciousness such divas could be imbued in. In a life or death situation they’re like totes OMG LOL attitudes could be funny.
See lessJust saying?