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  1. Posted: July 14, 2016In: Thriller

    After being held hostage on a first date for her suitor’s substantial drug debt, a teenage girl must rob her parents anonymously.

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    Added an answer on July 14, 2016 at 12:07 pm

    Perhaps the date was a set up? What if the date is the bad guy and he arranged for her parents to be under the watchful eye of a sniper, now he tells her that if she doesn't rob them he will give the order to shoot. Naturally if she calls the cops or tells them he will also kill them, so now she musRead more

    Perhaps the date was a set up?

    What if the date is the bad guy and he arranged for her parents to be under the watchful eye of a sniper, now he tells her that if she doesn’t rob them he will give the order to shoot. Naturally if she calls the cops or tells them he will also kill them, so now she must sneak into go back home, act all casual and steal a priceless something without them raising an eye brow.

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  2. Posted: July 13, 2016In: Thriller

    Obsessed with causality, a mathematician creates future simulation software only for it to predict he’ll die in three days unless he is prepared to kill a complete stranger, who is somehow connected to his fate, but instead he begins falling for her

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    Added an answer on July 14, 2016 at 12:04 pm

    Agreed with the above comments. Also I suggest re structuring the logline to better reflect the order of events in the plot. After he discovers he has three days to live a MC must... I'm not sure the explanation of how he discovers his impending death needs to be in the logline, as most of the filmRead more

    Agreed with the above comments.

    Also I suggest re structuring the logline to better reflect the order of events in the plot.

    After he discovers he has three days to live a MC must…

    I’m not sure the explanation of how he discovers his impending death needs to be in the logline, as most of the film will be about what he does in response to the discovery not the discovery itself.

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  3. Posted: July 9, 2016In: Drama

    Wanting to go legit a young drug dealer must do one last run to rescue her sister being held hostage by her boss; knowing she be going to be killed.

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    Added an answer on July 11, 2016 at 9:08 am

    Agreed with DPG.What if the runner's goal is to kill the drug boss? This way she can eliminate any future threats and have a different goal to just going legit - she has to kill in order to do so.

    Agreed with DPG.

    What if the runner’s goal is to kill the drug boss? This way she can eliminate any future threats and have a different goal to just going legit – she has to kill in order to do so.

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