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A toxic marriage, an unsuspecting kid who bears its brunt, and the morally-upright headmistress of the school he studies in, find fortuitous redemption through an unsettling incident ? his suicide.
It's not clear if this is a feature, short or series. What are you intending to develop? Also, it's best to get your head around what a logline is and how it functions - a brief description of the major plot points in a story for tired and over worked executives. Try and use this as a template for fRead more
It’s not clear if this is a feature, short or series. What are you intending to develop?
Also, it’s best to get your head around what a logline is and how it functions – a brief description of the major plot points in a story for tired and over worked executives.
Try and use this as a template for future versions: A significant event motivates a flawed main character to take action in pursuit of a goal.
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar to learn the basics.
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With all due respect to 'big reveals', most decision makers are not going to sit back in awe after reading a logline and let an amazing big reveal/twist settle in - they'll more likely give your logline a cursory glance and move on. Therefore, you're better off structuring the logline to fit the widRead more
With all due respect to ‘big reveals’, most decision makers are not going to sit back in awe after reading a logline and let an amazing big reveal/twist settle in – they’ll more likely give your logline a cursory glance and move on.
Therefore, you’re better off structuring the logline to fit the widely accepted formula of; event, main character, flaw and goal. This means, the better way to structure this logline would be to describe at the start what the toxic parents are doing in one single significant event that motivates the main character to take action.
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Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar to learn about loglines. To get you started; you need to specify a main character, a primary goal and an inciting event.
Check out the ‘Formula’ tab on the top bar to learn about loglines.
To get you started; you need to specify a main character, a primary goal and an inciting event.
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