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A 5 year old boy held captive with his mother in 10×10 foot shed his whole life struggles to adapt to the vast, complex outside world after they escape.
I haven't seen it, any good? I remember reading about it and thinking that It sounds very similar to Bad Boy Bubby.
I haven’t seen it, any good?
I remember reading about it and thinking that It sounds very similar to Bad Boy Bubby.
See lessIn a drought plagued future, a world weary scientist discovers water, unleashing an ancient evil that threatens the lives of her small community
Agreed with the above comments, the lack of detail make the plot hard to picture. To help you can take a look at the training tab up on the top bar for more information on logline construction.
Agreed with the above comments, the lack of detail make the plot hard to picture.
To help you can take a look at the training tab up on the top bar for more information on logline construction.
See lessWhen a solitary 11 year old 3D prints himself, he must defend his ?twin? against a dodgy businessman who will go to any lengths to get his hands on the clone, including kidnap, blackmail and murder.
I think one of the problems with this logline is that the story has no clear end point, as it is now, the boy will just keep on hiding his clone indefinitely. But the question is; how will he know he has achieved his goal of keeping his clone safe? I also think the other big problem is that there arRead more
I think one of the problems with this logline is that the story has no clear end point, as it is now, the boy will just keep on hiding his clone indefinitely. But the question is; how will he know he has achieved his goal of keeping his clone safe?
I also think the other big problem is that there are no clear stakes?in the action and events of the story, if the business man gets the clone the boy can just make another – after all, that’s the great thing about clones.
I think best to re think the concept with a ‘do or die’ aspect to it, what must he achieve or else…
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