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Haunted by the tragic loss of his estranged father, a young Samoan-American must choose between his corporate job or follow in his late father?s footsteps as the last in a long line of fire-knife dancers.
His decision would make for a great act 1 climax. Best to plan on shifting the decision earlier in the story and let the resulting action play out as the bulk of the film.
His decision would make for a great act 1 climax.
See lessBest to plan on shifting the decision earlier in the story and let the resulting action play out as the bulk of the film.
Haunted by the tragic loss of his estranged father, a young Samoan-American must choose between his corporate job or follow in his late father?s footsteps as the last in a long line of fire-knife dancers.
To choose is not to take action, and what will make this interesting is the actions he takes as a result of the choice he makes. Also best to re structure the concept so that the father's death motivates the main character, in other words use the father's passing as the inciting incident. After hisRead more
To choose is not to take action, and what will make this interesting is the actions he takes as a result of the choice he makes.
Also best to re structure the concept so that the father’s death motivates the main character, in other words use the father’s passing as the inciting incident.
After his father dies a Samoan-American…
I would also recommend to strengthen the bond between the father and son – instead of estranged make him beloved.
See lessA tough social worker takes fighting women’s rights into her own hands but can she put her cultural, religious and family obligations aside to fight for herself.
This describes a situation but not a plot.A logline is used either as a structuring tool during script development, or a pitching tool once the script is complete in both cases its primary function is to describe a plot. For a plot to be clear it needs to define a dramatic need that comes about as aRead more
This describes a situation but not a plot.
A logline is used either as a structuring tool during script development, or a pitching tool once the script is complete in both cases its primary function is to describe a plot.
For a plot to be clear it needs to define a dramatic need that comes about as a result of an inciting incident and goal, both of which are missing in the current draft.
Ask why did she suddenly?decide to fight against violence? What exactly does she want achieve?
See lessBest to re draft with the answers to these questions.