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  1. Posted: May 19, 2016In: Adventure

    A loser father?s innocent lie, that he is a superhero, puts his kids in trouble who are held as hostages with terrorist; and now he must fight them without breaking his kid?s myth that he is a superhero.

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    Added an answer on May 20, 2016 at 12:37 pm

    DPG nailed it. If this is a comedy there are not further productive notes, however if this is a drama then the father's flaw needs elaborating on.

    DPG nailed it.

    If this is a comedy there are not further productive notes, however if this is a drama then the father’s flaw needs elaborating on.

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  2. Posted: May 18, 2016In: Comedy

    A young Midwestern Congressman must travel across the country with his rival for the White House, a veteran East Coast Senator, in the ultimate road trip reality show.

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    Added an answer on May 19, 2016 at 1:43 pm

    Well clearly their goal is to win the election, but is there anything else you can give them? What I mean is the obstacles, which are what make the story interesting, seem rather small. The fact that they're sharing a car will create some conflict but no additional obstacle than if they were in sepaRead more

    Well clearly their goal is to win the election, but is there anything else you can give them?

    What I mean is the obstacles, which are what make the story interesting, seem rather small. The fact that they’re sharing a car will create some conflict but no additional obstacle than if they were in separate vehicles.

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  3. Posted: May 18, 2016In: Examples

    A simple-minded, kindhearted man enjoys a life of accidental success and fame when all he wants is to love the beautiful woman he has known since they were kids.

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    Added an answer on May 19, 2016 at 1:18 pm

    Good point about the brave dramatic choice. I do believe that Forrest underwent a significant change throughout the story, and in his change inspired other characters around him to change as well. He changed?from being the son of his parent?to the protector of his country and eventually to be the paRead more

    Good point about the brave dramatic choice.

    I do believe that Forrest underwent a significant change throughout the story, and in his change inspired other characters around him to change as well.

    He changed?from being the son of his parent?to the protector of his country and eventually to be the parent of his own child. He assumed the responsibility of parenthood as the last phase of his process of growth. Sure he staid naive and kindhearted, but he grew to become a responsible adult.

    His inner journey wasn’t conscious or intentional, rather a product of him and his environment. I believe that in the best of stories the inner journey of change occurs unbeknown to the main character.

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