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  1. Posted: May 5, 2016In: Family

    When a local library begins shredding it’s books due to the popularity of e-readers, a limited edition copy of Macbeth must lead his Shakespearean archive to safety at the National Archive before they’re shredded too.

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    Added an answer on May 6, 2016 at 12:34 pm

    Interesting premise but the wording didn't work for me. I did not make the leap of logic to understand that "...must lead his..." referred to either the book or character within. As a fantasy comedy it can work but the descriptions need re thinking.

    Interesting premise but the wording didn’t work for me. I did not make the leap of logic to understand that “…must lead his…” referred to either the book or character within.
    As a fantasy comedy it can work but the descriptions need re thinking.

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  2. Posted: May 2, 2016In: Examples

    After an unemployed single dad loses his home, he struggles to get it back by working for the corrupt real estate broker who evicted him.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 5:06 pm

    I haven't seen the film. Is there an element of revenge or payback that the main character is planing on when taking the job with the real estate broker?If there isn't one then it seems as if the main character became the bad guy him self, is there a?redemption at least towards the end?

    I haven’t seen the film.
    Is there an element of revenge or payback that the main character is planing on when taking the job with the real estate broker?

    If there isn’t one then it seems as if the main character became the bad guy him self, is there a?redemption at least towards the end?

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  3. Posted: May 2, 2016In: SciFi

    After telepathic extremists seize control of the Solar system, an elite programmer must sneak onto occupied Mars and subvert the enemy’s communications network, or say goodbye to freedom of thought forever.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 4:57 pm

    There is a lot going on in this concept, which can be good but can also work against it. This is obviously a scifi story with a twist, an inexplicable force of nature - telepathy, is being used agains super technology. ?This can be interesting and reminiscent of Minority report. However I think theRead more

    There is a lot going on in this concept, which can be good but can also work against it.

    This is obviously a scifi story with a twist, an inexplicable force of nature – telepathy, is being used agains super technology. ?This can be interesting and reminiscent of Minority report. However I think the additional complexity introduced by the setting i.e the whole solar system, and the fact that all humanity’s freedom of thought is at stake may be a bit much if not confusing. Lastly what exactly does “?say good-by to freedom of thought?” actually mean? Will the telepaths control all brains in the solar system or will their be a device that does this? Or is there an “evil corporation” behind it all?

    If the main character is the programmer than perhaps best to describe the events from his or her point of view, and simplify them to focus on their actions alone. Why must this particular character save everyone? What is the personal stakes? What motivates him directly to take action?

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