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Three days before Armageddon, a drug addicted lawyer struggles to be free from his addiction, his friends and his day job .The devil has marked him, he has made a claim .To survive the Dreadful war he has to beat him at this final hour.
Agreed with the above comments. Also the premise is confusing - how does he know that Armageddon is three days away? Is he the only one that knows or do all people know?? Why not just set it during Armageddon instead? Lastly best to describe exactly how one beats the devil himself, this sounds implaRead more
Agreed with the above comments.
Also the premise is confusing – how does he know that Armageddon is three days away? Is he the only one that knows or do all people know?? Why not just set it during Armageddon instead?
Lastly best to describe exactly how one beats the devil himself, this sounds implausible according to mainstream theology. Perhaps best if he needs to banish the devil not beat him.
See lessWhen a 16-year-old delinquent in a Tibetan refugee camp is recognized by the Dalai Lama as a reincarnated spritual leader, he finds himself a stranger in his own life.
I've got to say that I miss read the original logline as well, this is probably indicative of a flaw in the logline. I think best to re visit the wording at least to emphasize that the boy is not recognised as the Dalai Lama but as another spiritual leader. That said I don't think the stakes are higRead more
I’ve got to say that I miss read the original logline as well, this is probably indicative of a flaw in the logline. I think best to re visit the wording at least to emphasize that the boy is not recognised as the Dalai Lama but as another spiritual leader.
That said I don’t think the stakes are high enough, the Dalai Lama is the spiritual leader of billions his significance is imminence. The re incarnation of a monk would be far less a “big deal” and therefore presents less of an obstacle for the boy to adapt for.? Would this be as interesting as if he were as the spiritual leader of billions of people and recognised around the world?
See lessThe facts of a true event shouldn’t stand in the way of a good story, and if you’re trying to tell the story of a delinquent adapting to a sudden change and new responsibilities then perhaps greater stake would make for a better story.
Brilliant but eccentric mathematician Alan Turing and a team of code-breakers race against time to turn the tide of World War II by doing the impossible: decrypt the Nazi communications code.
I think that if he felt shame in his sexuality then it should be mentioned as a flaw, but other wise it shouldn't. I find the interesting part of his story being how he fought?the Nazis not bigotry. Perhaps start the logline with an event, it could be as simple as a German victory in the war that maRead more
I think that if he felt shame in his sexuality then it should be mentioned as a flaw, but other wise it shouldn’t.
I find the interesting part of his story being how he fought?the Nazis not bigotry.
Perhaps start the logline with an event, it could be as simple as a German victory in the war that made him need to be commissioned to crack the code. Basically use the rich tapestry of WW2 events ?to give his story a starting point/inciting incident.
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