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Waking up in hospital a soldier is told it is three years after his last memory. But people seem to be very interested about what he remembers about the war. He must figure out if he is sick or part of an elaborate scam to get information.
Better if you were to clarify what is at stake, without the specifics of your story it sounds like a generic mind game movie. For example, what if he was an ally soldier and knew the location of an A-bomb, he must tell someone where the bomb is but if he tells the wrong people it could spell disasteRead more
Better if you were to clarify what is at stake, without the specifics of your story it sounds like a generic mind game movie.
For example, what if he was an ally soldier and knew the location of an A-bomb, he must tell someone where the bomb is but if he tells the wrong people it could spell disaster.
I.e:
After waking from a three year coma with acute amnesia, the only thing a paranoid soldier remembers is the secret location of an A-bomb, he must discern whether or not he is among enemies or friends.
Goal – disarm the bomb
See lessFlaw – paranoia
Obstacle – amnesia
Two unlikely partners, whom have the ability to bend space, time, and travel universes endlessly, must learn the secrets of the universe to harness their powers while being hunted down by their future selves to prevent them from creating a cosmic and catastrophic nightmare.
Sounds like two Doctors to me... Similarities to one of the most successful franchises ever aside, the logline lacks detail and as DPG wrote,? contains many complex logic questions. For example, what does "...learn the secrets of the universe..." mean? Or why unlikely partners? Why two main characteRead more
Sounds like two Doctors to me…
Similarities to one of the most successful franchises ever aside, the logline lacks detail and as DPG wrote,? contains many complex logic questions.
For example, what does “…learn the secrets of the universe…” mean? Or why unlikely partners? Why two main characters and not one? Why do they need to harness their powers do they not already have them?
Clarity is key for this concept. If possible, try to break it down to its most simple elements and describe them from a single character’s point of view.
See lessA Talent Agency for Dogs struggles to find a dog for an important German beer commercial.
Best to describe a premise from the point of view of a single character and explain their stakes. Who is the main character? Why is it so important to find a dog for this one add? Why is this casting job more important than any other casting job they have?
Best to describe a premise from the point of view of a single character and explain their stakes.
Who is the main character? Why is it so important to find a dog for this one add? Why is this casting job more important than any other casting job they have?
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