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After a sensitive cocoa farmer from Ecuador is getting engaged with a rich entrepreneur girl, he must decide between the marriage to rescue his bankrupt family plantation or his true love who lives far away in Germany.
The location specific details seem unrelated to the plot. You could write this story in the American mid west, China or Greece the plot still works. Poor farmer about to loose it all gets engaged to a rich woman to save his family business but falls in love with another woman before the wedding. I tRead more
The location specific details seem unrelated to the plot. You could write this story in the American mid west, China or Greece the plot still works. Poor farmer about to loose it all gets engaged to a rich woman to save his family business but falls in love with another woman before the wedding.
I think the concept of “reader letter” is too obscure and possibly unclear, the details of how they met may not be important what is important is the love triangle your plot is centered on.
The choice between marrying for money or marrying for love has been done many times both in comedy and drama, perhaps add in a description of the stakes at hand. However high and original the stakes are, will help make this concept distinct from many others.
See lessDuring the early 1970s London, an English Police officer is framed for corruption charges and goes on the run to Africa where the Russian KGB recruit him; after years of seductive traitorous espionage, he falls in love with a Bulgarian Woman and in order to marry her, he must escape the iron grips of the KGB and face his corrupt past.
Agreed with Richiev - the original logline is too long and contains many redundant details. Is the main plot a love story, spy story or redemption one? Accordingly you need to pick an appropriate goal and structure the logline to fit.
Agreed with Richiev – the original logline is too long and contains many redundant details.
See lessIs the main plot a love story, spy story or redemption one? Accordingly you need to pick an appropriate goal and structure the logline to fit.
A boy fights for survival during the 872 day siege of Leningrad.
Brevity and simplicity are the essence of a good logline, unlike most writers you've certainly employed both in this first logline draft. Now pick and choose the specific detail, asked for in the above comments, that will make this a compelling story and subsequently a strong concept.
Brevity and simplicity are the essence of a good logline, unlike most writers you’ve certainly employed both in this first logline draft. Now pick and choose the specific detail, asked for in the above comments, that will make this a compelling story and subsequently a strong concept.
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